Monday 12 October 2009

Script with timeline

Script EVE – It Kills Me 3:40

11 secs. Worth of shots of artist before the first verse

Verse 1

9 sec. girl in studio

_I can tell the way you look into her eyes

_The way you see the night and I try not to cry (I try not to)

3 sec close up
_It’s not so easy seeing things up in my face

5 sec. studio shot again
_I see it nearly everyday and I don’t wanna stay (I don’t want to)

4 sec.
_Things aren’t how they used to be

6 sec.
_Connection with you ain’t there baby

_And I can’t change the plan

9 sec. close up
_I’m strong enough to understand

_You’re my one and only man

7 sec. studio – extreme close up attitude shots
_But I can’t see a happy place

_No noooo no


Chorus


6 sec. studio shot
_Things have changed dramatically

_I’m just trying hard to see

9 sec. attitude shot against wall
_The way you dropped me off and picked her up

_Boy it kills me


10 sec. close up of girl in studio
_You used to be so close to me

_I thought we’d have a family

6 sec. studio shot
_But you switched roles and turned the key

_Boy it kills me

Verse 2

5 sec.
_I can see the way you’re trying to be all smooth

7 sec.
_Trying to play me for a fool

_Thinking she’s a jewel (I ain’t no fool)

4 sec. attitude shot
_Baby I got news for you

4 sec. artist standing up against green screen in studio
_The only Jew that’s pulled you through

4 sec. studio shot
_Is standing directly in front of you (in front of you)

10 sec.
_Don’t you realise what you have

_You know she’s always got your back

_She lives her life for you

_Don’t you know

2 sec. girl in studio shot
_So tell me what it is you like

6 sec.
_You see the darkness in her eyes

_The way she smiles, the way she cries



10 sec. studio shot

_Things have changed dramatically

_I’m just trying hard to see

6 sec.
_The way you dropped me off and picked her up

_Boy it kills me

10 sec. studio shot
_You used to be so close to me

_I thought we’d have a family

_But you switched roles and turned the key

_Boy it kills me


5 sec. studio
_Ooooo you know it kills me

_You can feel it burning me

9 sec. standing up against the wall
_You can see the tears run down my face into a waterfall

_You make me go crazy

_But I can see what’s going on and I don’t know if I can stay or should I go

5 sec. studio artist talking to camera
_Oh noooooooo

_Oh nooooooooo
_Noooo no nooooo no

Nooo no noooooooooooooo!


7 sec. studio shot
_Things have changed dramatically

_I’m just trying hard to see

4 sec.
_The way you dropped me off and picked her up

_Boy it kills me (Boy you’re killing me)

8 sec. studio shot
_You used to be so close to me (yeah yeah)

_I thought we’d have a family

_But you switched roles and turned the key

_Boy it kills me


7 sec. studio shot
_Things have changed dramatically

_I’m just trying hard to see

4 sec. artist crouched down and talking to the camera
_The way you dropped me off and picked her up

_Boy it kills me

13 sec. dancing then with fade out
_You used to be so close to me

_I thought we’d have a family

_But you switched roles and turned the key

_Boy it kills me

_Ooooo

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